It’s really nice to see how you work your sketches. Also I really like the flow between the stripes in Cupkace-tan, it gives a feel of movement and fun and I’m enjoying the colorful sound effects and the *pomf =3* in page 2.
…btw does the drawings in the chalckboard in page 3 mean something?
More so than overworking, don’t overthink it. It looks good. Don’t get hung up on trying to make it look “better”, cause that if I know one thing it’s that you’ll never reach that mystical goal (protip: it’s all in your head). You’d only end up tossing poor Cupcake just like you did Penny ;___;